Just because you have been to prison, in no way means you should be considered a threat to society. Every single person born into the world has the capability to do good; all we have to do is give them the chance.
I would say what the point is in the beginning, for example. "Every day people who have been to prison get discriminated against every day activities." But its good.
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ReplyDeleteI like the part about the capability to do good. Good thesis.
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ReplyDeleteI would say what the point is in the beginning, for example. "Every day people who have been to prison get discriminated against every day activities." But its good.
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